During my last eye
opening topic exploration blog, I decided I was going to go the animal
endangerment route. However, I realized it had to be revised a bit because of
three reasons (abc’s):
a)
It was way too broad of a topic
b)
It did not have a specific proposal of action
for the reader
c)
Did not mix my “oil supply”/ environmental topic
from my previous two papers
So I decided to revise it JUST a
bit and fix my problems as easy as abc, 123 as Michael Jackson would say in his
song. So my OFFICIAL topic proposal is the following:
The topic is “the slaughtering of animals and destruction of habitat
that is harming the environment because of companies, unbeknownst by the
public, in order to increase the profit of their products.”
Even though global warming is affecting
the habitat of species around the world, the destruction of habitat by humans
for profit is much larger. The lack of information presented to the public
based on the tragedy of the commons refers not only to oil supply but to animal
endangerment as well. In order to increase productivity, businesses hurt
animals in the process that are not necessary.
For example, dolphins used to be slaughtered unmercifully in tuna
fishing, since tuna are dolphin’s favorite food. Therefore, instead of setting
them free and losing tuna in the process, they decided to simply kill the
dolphins to up their profit. Now, in response to this dolphin genocide,
dolphin-safe tuna is now available by a seal of approval on tuna cans. However,
many of these cases go unknown to the public still. I will call for the
audience to simply make safer choices for animals and the environment with what
items they purchase for example.
THe doplhin safe label as shown above is found on cans of Tuna if you look.
A Dolphin stuck in a fisherman's net.
The slaughter of dolphins on a boat for TUNA catching. Yes those are REAL guts coming out (I flinched while pasting this on here.)
The audience I would direct this to
would be environmentalists who enjoy reading environmental news and also people
who are not informed of how much power the consumer has in changing the world’s
environment. I would like to post this “Paper 3” in www.theenviornmentalblog.org
which is a blog that environmentalists “guests” are able to send a submission
to have their blog posted in one of the categories. I would also like to post it in a more “everyone
can see and learn” area, so I was thinking either on facebook or a social media
blog to teach about little ways to help the environment through purchases.
The format I would like to use to
convey this topic to the audiences is a blog format of an article. I would like
to integrate free-form writing with pictures and perhaps some video clips. This
would greatly assist in integrating pathos in my argument. Since the disturbing
truth of what injustices are occurring and have the horrifying pictures
influence their want to make a change (As shown above with the merciless dolphin killing). On the other end of the spectrum, the
pictures of baby animals bringing in the awwwhs and the cuteness factor (WHO IN
THEIR RIGHT MINDS COULDN’T LOVE a blog like article integrating baby
animals!!!!) (P.S remember the power point that was emailed to you with all of
those animal pictures? Remember the pictures in the other ones? OH RIGHT. You
don’t.) Therefore, the pictures could also bring a memorability factor as well.
Please Enjoy the following cuteness of wild baby animals on me:
P.S Yes the last ines aren't wild but they ashowed up when I googled, baby animals, and I just HAD to include them!!!
Joanna, excellent job narrowing down your topic to make it less broad. I think this will be really interesting! You will also be able to find a lot of really excellent ways, articles, movies and such to back up your points. I think there actually several Disney movies, the ones they put out for Earth Day, that you could use to help bring up your point. You could even find a way to use a movie like Finding Nemo (when the fishermen are trying to catch all the Tuna) to help your topic. Just some ideas that I had started to think about when reading your topic proposal! Excellent work!
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Well Joana, it sounds like this project is going to be a walk in the park for you. The causal environmentally conscious audience will be an easy audience to talk to from any attitude you want. I’m interested to see the free form writing you come up with, and all the cute furry animals you post. Not the degutted animals though. Hmm, I guess that’s the point though huh? Anyways are dolphins your only example? Its fine that way but I obviously, more proof make arguments more convincing. I’m sure youre just going to drench this in ethos, which is fine. In fact, I suggest it.
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